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摘要:Do you agree or disagree, its more important to work quickly which leading to many mistakes than to work slowly which can make sure everything. 1.陈述自己的观点。 2.以正面的例子来支撑观点 3. 以反面的例子来支撑观点

Do you agree or disagree, it's more important to work quickly which leading to many mistakes than to work slowly which can make sure everything.
1.陈述自己的观点。
2.以正面的例子来支撑观点
3. 以反面的例子来支撑观点
4.加深论证
5.总结陈词

Studying and working in a strenuous society, which attitude should individuals hold their heavy work? I would agree with the point that work slowly which make sure everything, which is proved by following statement.
Working slowly to avoid making mistake can increase the commodities quality, perfect the project, and earn better test scores. People turn to make choices in buying a good quality commodity instead of buying the one of poor quality. The superior prefers to choose plan with details and new thoughts in it rather than choose rough and outmoded one. The teacher doesn’t appreciate students who fail with several mistakes, but the one who get the high scores. All above proves that the one with no mistake will get success, as most of people don't care about the process but result.  
On the contrary, a building which sold out has a poor quality of its building materials, people will be hurt in both physically and mentally. A meal with dirty material damage people’s heath and produce negative effect to the restaurants. A plan with few mistakes leads a company to make a wrong decision, get a failure in competition in the marketing and even let the company close down. A lawyer will be beat by his opponent with several mistakes in his evidence. A patient will receive a negative affect even lose his life by a operation with several careless mistakes. 
If everyone in the society completes the work with a quick speed but careless working attitude, we will not satisfy with the bastard goods and service. These is kind of cases that people don't take their responsibility in their work. All of these demonstrate that the one with several mistakes will bring an army of harm.
For these examples, I would hold a view that working slowly and make sure everything is necessary for today. Slow down you work pace and superior. Then you can also enjoy  perfect commodities and service.



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